The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.
The line graph shows how
car
ownership in the UK changed between 1975 and 2005.
Overall
, the proportion of
people
who owned two or three cars rose
while
the figure for those who owned no
car
declined.
Additionally
, having
one
car
was the most common situation during the period shown. In 1975, nearly half of the UK population had
one
car
while
people
with no
car
took up a smaller
percentage
, at roughly 43%. These figures both declined over the following ten
years
, to around 37% for
people
having
one
car
and 25% for those with no
car
. The
percentage
of those who owned 2 or 3 cars was approximately 7% and 3% respectively in 1975, and both experienced increases over the
next
10
years
to around 13% and 5% respectively. Over the
next
20
years
, the
percentage
of those with
one
car
gradually rose back up to 45%
whereas
the
percentage
of those with no
car
continued to decline to about 22%.
On the other hand
, the proportion of
people
having 2 or 3 cars continued to rise over the following 20
years
to 19% and 9% respectively.
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