The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harm to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The table illustrates the wages of secondary and high school teacher’s of five
different
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Different
countries in the year 2009. Overall
,
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,
it is noticed that highly salaried teacher’s in all categories are found in Luxembourg while the least are observed Australia. In Australia, the teacher’s receive the starting
salary
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of 28,000 and after 15
years
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Years
, only 20,000 more is added to their total sum which is equal to their maximum
salary
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that is
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been
the state or fact of existing
being
paid.
Similar situation
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The similar situation
A similar situation
is in Denmark only the
difference
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is that their starting is 45,000 and there is a rise of only 9000 after 15 years
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.
A marginal
difference
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of a year is seen in both the countries in terms of years required to reach the maximum
salary
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.
On the other hand
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, Japan and Korea run parallel with each other with a
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difference
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A difference
Difference
of 4000 at
start
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the start
and
difference
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of 3 years to reach the maximum.
Also
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japan pays higher wages than
korea
an Asian peninsula (off Manchuria) separating the Yellow Sea and the East Sea; the Korean name is Dae-Han-Min-Gook or Han-Gook
Korea
cure
core
and require the highest number of years to reach the maximum
salary
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comapred
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
compares
to all other countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tendency
  • news reports
  • media
  • focus
  • problems
  • emergencies
  • positive developments
  • harm
  • individuals
  • society
  • agree
  • disagree
  • fear
  • anxiety
  • distorted perception
  • reality
  • overlooked
  • overshadowed
  • negative bias
  • mental health
  • well-being
  • social progress
  • innovation
  • balanced reporting
  • inspire
  • motivate
  • holistic view
  • informed decisions
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