Nowadays more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult weather conditions, such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic region and so on. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays it seems to be boring for people to go to travel to some locations where we used to go

such

as Korea, Europe. People would like to have some exciting experiences of their trip, so they choose places like the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. These places have tough conditions.

Therefore

, I will discuss about both good things and bad things if we travel to these places. On the one hand, people will learn surviving skills in challenging

extreme weather situations

such

as how to warm your body when you are in the freezing temperature (32°F) of the Antarctic or how to find water if you are stuck

lost in a desert. Once they’ve learned the surviving skills, they will be more persistent.

Therefore

, they will not give up easily

effortlessly so that they can finish

complete

end their journey successfully

triumphantly. After the adventure, they will achieve energy, health

strength

vitality and many worthy

valuable

helpful experiences

skills.

This

journey will be one of the most memorable

unforgettable adventures in their entire life because they can see some beautiful scenes that cannot be seen nowhere else. But

on the other hand

, it can be risky to our life. Lots of travellers have lost while journeying the Sahara Desert or while travelling

exploring the Antarctic. When they are lost, disasters are likely to happen. So people can get hurt easily or maybe, in the worst case, die. They will

also

get serious injuries that leave them motionless for the rest of their lives,

such

as being poisoned by snakes in the Sahara or having an accident while travelling the Antarctic. In conclusion, visiting places with difficult condition have both interests and dangerousness. People should consider carefully before attending to

such

journeys.

Fri Mar 27 2020

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Nowadays more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult weather conditions, such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic region and so on. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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With internet improvement people can & opinions on certain goods or service that they purchased. Is this good or bad thing?.

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