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Some people think that international car free days are an efficient way of reducing air pollution; others argue there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Every year, thousands of people leave their countryside houses to settle in urban
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 either within the country or across borders. Some people take
this
 step with the intention of improving their
lifestyle whereas
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lifestyle, whereas
, others seek
migration
 when they suffer from a natural or man-made disaster. There are various reasons for the occurrence of rural-urban
migration
 and the problems associated with it. Most of the people who live in
pastoral areas
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the pastoral areas
 are self-employed in agriculture and farming. With changing climatic conditions, agricultural productivity and farmer’s financial security are greatly affected. The city
life not
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life, not
 only provides countryside people with better job
opportunities but
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opportunities, but
also
 with superior educational facilities thereby compelling people migrate towards conurbation. Though rural-urban
migration
 can prove to be advantageous from an individual’s perspective, there are some drawbacks that society has to deal with. With an increased rate of
migration
 taking place, there are negative effects on the agricultural industry of a country because the rural development does not materialize. Having a large population in the cities leads to pressure on the natural resources and the services (health and education) of urban areas. Most importantly, due to the high illiteracy rate in rural areas, people are not suitable for better quality jobs and they end up living in slum areas. To sum up, rural-urban
migration
 is increasing at an alarming rate. I think the government should take action like providing better employment and services in rural areas so that the countrymen do not feel the need to continuously drift to urban
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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