The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts compare the proportions of
water
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consumed for three different purposes in six regions across the globe.
It is clear that
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a vast majority of
water
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is utilised for agriculture in South America, Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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,
whereas
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North Americans and Europeans use their largest amount of
water
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for industrial
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purpose
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purposes
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.
To begin
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with, more than 80% of the
water
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in Africa, Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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goes to
agricultural
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the agricultural
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sector.
Similarly
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, South Americans consume a large proportion of
water
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for the same
purpose
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, at 71%.
While
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industrial
water
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consumption in South East
Asia
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accounts for 12% of total
water
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usage, the figure for Central
Asia
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is merely 5%. Interestingly enough, these two regions use the same percentage of
water
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for
domestic
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the domestic
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purpose
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(7%).
In addition
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, more
water
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is consumed for household
function
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functions
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in South America than in Africa, which
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19% and 9% respectively. With regard to North America and Europe, about half of
water
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consumption is for
industrial
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the industrial
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division.
While
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North Americans use 39% of the
water
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for agriculture, Europeans consume less amount of
water
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for the same
purpose
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, at 32%. For
domestic
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the domestic
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sector, we can see that both regions utilise the smallest percentage of
water
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia, purpose with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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