The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts compare the proportions of
water
consumed for three different purposes in six regions across the globe. It is clear that
a vast majority of water
is utilised for agriculture in South America, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
, whereas
North Americans and Europeans use their largest amount of water
for industrial purpose
.
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purposes
To begin
with, more than 80% of the water
in Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
goes to agricultural
sector. Add an article
the agricultural
Similarly
, South Americans consume a large proportion of water
for the same purpose
, at 71%. While
industrial water
consumption in South East Asia
accounts for 12% of total water
usage, the figure for Central Asia
is merely 5%. Interestingly enough, these two regions use the same percentage of water
for domestic
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the domestic
a domestic
purpose
(7%). Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
In addition
, more water
is consumed for household function
in South America than in Africa, which Fix the agreement mistake
functions
is
19% and 9% respectively.
With regard to North America and Europe, about half of Unnecessary verb
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water
consumption is for industrial
division. Correct article usage
the industrial
While
North Americans use 39% of the water
for agriculture, Europeans consume less amount of water
for the same purpose
, at 32%. For domestic
sector, we can see that both regions utilise the smallest percentage of Correct article usage
the domestic
water
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