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what are the causes and effects of staff uniforms?

To use special clothes at work is one of the essential rules of companies and in
this
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 essay the causes and effects of
this
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 will be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
 before a conclusion is drawn.
Firstly
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, the main cause of using
uniform
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 is to enhance the public status of
company
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a company
the company
. In other word, when the staff of company wears
uniform
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 they can attract the attention of people and because of the
uniform
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 the service of company conglomerates.
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, in
shoppping
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
Centers
uniform
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 gives a good chance to people for recognizing the workers of the shop and if people need help, because of the
uniform
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 they can find employees easily.
Also
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, companies can promote their product via the uniforms with some sly ways,
such
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 as using green
uniform
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 in vegetable section of
shop
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the shop
shops
 which induce people to buy the products
.
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.
Moreover
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, the uniforms
are not only affect
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are not only affecting
do not only affect
are not only affected
have not only affected
customers but
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customers, but
also
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 they play
intrinsic role
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an intrinsic role
 on worker’s mood. İt is obvious that a chunk of uniforms
contain
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contains
 vivid
color
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
 or some special symbols which affect the worker in a good way and motivate the staff member to do better.
Furthermore
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, to become
homogeneous
all of the same or similar kind or nature
homogenous
 in
trems
status with respect to the relations between people or groups
terms
 of clothes can be congenial ambiance for staff
in
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during
 work hours. For
examlpe
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, the
uniform
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 can eradicate the difference between the wealthy workers and other workers who are not financially strong as them and from these. İn conclusion, it is evident fact that in order to
creat equality
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create quality
 and high quality
at
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of
 work, uniforms are one of the
irreplaceble
impossible to replace
irreplaceable
replaceable
 aspects
for
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of
 companies.

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