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Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that doing
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 kind of
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 for entire
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 is the best choice while others believe that to change jobs often is crucial.
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 essay by discussing and supporting with examples will show that switching jobs often are more advantageous than staying for
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 in just
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. It is believed that having
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work
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 position for the whole
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 is the proper choice that someone can make. Behind
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 choice, there are several reasons where the most important might be mentioned the comforts and security it provides.
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 it creates a comfortable and secure state, in my opinion,
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 might put people in a monotony mode which is dangerous for a healthy
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Also, this
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 kind of mindset might fit on only for persons who refuse to take risks and make changes.
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, according to a questionnaire to 1000 retired people from Eurostat Albania, 70 percent of them have admitted that they had only on a job for the entire
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 because of being afraid about their capabilities to do something different.
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 it is believed that changing often the jobs is more effective. Doing different jobs during
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 gives the opportunity to learn different skills and to earn more money because a person have the possibility to choose another job which produce more incomes that the current
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. It is agreed that possessing different abilities expand the variety and levels of
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 someone can do.
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, according to Forbes almost all of the entrepreneurs in their early career have changed their jobs often in order to gain more experience. To conclude, having a constant job for the whole
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 might lead in securing your future, but it has its own drawback as people live a monotone
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, changing post constantly helps in gaining more abilities needed to get a better and more paid
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 position which in my opinion is essential nowadays.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Career longevity
  • Mastery
  • Professional growth
  • Job satisfaction
  • Personal development
  • Routine
  • Work relationships
  • Company culture
  • Boredom
  • Stagnation
  • Adaptability
  • Networking
  • Industries
  • Expertise development
  • Job security
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