Some people believe that too much attention and too much resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

Nowadays, it is widely argued that too much attention is being paid to the protection of

wildlife

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. I strongly agree with

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opinion since in reality individuals care too much about wild animals.

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of all, the extinction of certain animals is the natural phenomenon

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Despite our effort, we might not be capable of deterring species which are on the verge of extinction from disappearing. Take tigers as an example. Even if scientists and governments are expending substantial amounts of money to save these species of animals, their attempts are being ineffective.

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, public money is limited which means that nation's budget should be allocated to more important sectors rather than being spent on impossible things.

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, scientists and the governments might contribute to the inventions in terms of medicine by creating

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a medical treatment

which can overcome fatal diseases

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as

coronovirus

relating to or characteristic of carnivores

carnivorous

or cancer.

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would be more useful.

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,

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does not mean that the

wildlife

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should not be protected. The governments need to keep conducting campaigns devoted to

wildlife

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conservation thereby

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conservation, thereby

raising public awareness.

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, strict punishments

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as big fines should be imposed

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for

offences

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as illegal hunting or fishing. I believe that

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will discourage humans from damaging the

wildlife

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. To conclude, it is crucial to conserve the animals.

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, too much resources should not be diverted to

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sector.