More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

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choosing study
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choosing to study
science
. The many students are not select
science
due to the fact that some of the
contidions
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
.
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essay discusses the argument and I will give my perspective. There are two factors that.
First
of all,
this
subjects
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subject
are challenging
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is challenging
step by step and it is necessary patience as well as intelligence. Lİke for
Pyhsics
the science of matter and energy and their interactions
physics
student
has to research a
loads
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load
comparison
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compared
with the other students or departments.
This
is because which discouraged many
student
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students
from choosing
science
. The other
charesteristic
is that employment opportunities are limited
for
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in
to
this
field and
also
competative
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competition
competitive
competed
. Unfortunately. After the graduated, most of the students are trying to find a
job but
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job, but
they compulsory work a
litle
limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent
little
salary.
Therefore they
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Therefore, they
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have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined
tend
to choose
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
subject which
allow
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allows
the
find
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finds
job.
However
. Society may effective
this
situation because most of the
student
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students
can find it insignificant.
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is why business or economics has become
prevelant
most frequent or common
prevalent
a lot.
Hence unemployment
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Hence, unemployment
will be imbalanced in the future. İn fact many peoples
has
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have
same specialist
therefore
the
competetive
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competition
competitive
has increased.
This
situation pushes worrying many students.
Other
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Another
problem is that there are not enough
qualifie
meeting the proper standards and requirements and training for an office or position or task
qualified
people.
Employes
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Employees
Employers
are low. More
student
unless decided to study
science
at the üniversity. Sooner or later we will have to face some of problems
becaue
for the reason that; on account of
because
of could not find studying
science
studens
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
student
studies
. İn conclusion,
Science
subjects and employment opportunities are block to select as
this
science
departmends
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department
departments
. Because it is hard beside there are a lot of graduated. They can’t even find a job. Because of
this
negative
reasons
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reason
, people don’t look at scientific departments. They would like
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to get
rid
of stress their
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of stress in their
life.

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