You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir, My name is Lama and I am writing

this

letter to express some problems I am facing in my shared

room

and I hope you will be able to support me as I need to have a suitable place in order to work and learn.

First

, I am studying civil engineering at the college and I am living in a shared

room

with 3 other students.

Furthermore

, they are not respecting the

room

rules and they are having parties

each

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with each

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other

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at weekend

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weekend

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Although

I asked them many times to stop their noise and follow instructions, they are not behaving well.

Second

, I have to spend a lot of time drawing my sketches and writing laboratory reports,

however

, I am not able to do all my tasks because there is noise all the time in the rooms.

Also

, I am not able to sleep well because of the various parties done after midnight.

Third

, I would like to have a single

room

for myself only, so I can be more comfortable and relaxed to do all my tasks and projects.

Finally

, I will be waiting for your response as soon as possible and I wish you can find me a solution as I am not feeling well.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

205 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
respectfully request

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