You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, My name is Lama and I am writing
this
letter to express some problems I am facing in my shared
room
and I hope you will be able to support me as I need to have a suitable place in order to work and learn.
First
, I am studying civil engineering at the college and I am living in a shared
room
with 3 other students.
Furthermore
, they are not respecting the
room
rules and they are having parties
each
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other
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.
Although
I asked them many times to stop their noise and follow instructions, they are not behaving well.
Second
, I have to spend a lot of time drawing my sketches and writing laboratory reports,
however
, I am not able to do all my tasks because there is noise all the time in the rooms.
Also
, I am not able to sleep well because of the various parties done after midnight.
Third
, I would like to have a single
room
for myself only, so I can be more comfortable and relaxed to do all my tasks and projects.
Finally
, I will be waiting for your response as soon as possible and I wish you can find me a solution as I am not feeling well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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