Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Technology, undoubtedly, has given many better ways of

effetively

in an effective manner

effectively

performing in various sectors of life. The advent of modern

techonological

based in scientific and industrial progress

technological

innovations, like computers, smart phones, high speed internet,

artifical

contrived by art rather than nature

artificial

intelligence etc

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intelligence, etc.

intelligence etc.

, has revolutionised the way we

work

and are

heavy

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heavily

dependent on these tools for getting the things done.

This

makes us

vunerable

susceptible to attack

vulnerable

as we would cease to

work

if these technological tools fails or breaks down. In the past days,

workgroups

heavy

dependent

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depending

dependence

on the usage of pen and paper, which made it fail-proof, but

on the other hand

was time consuming and made it difficult to keep a record and share with other co-workers. For

instances

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instance

, minutes recorded during a meeting on paper might be difficult to

inderstand

know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

if the writer has a poor handwriting.

Also

, circulation of those minutes would require re-writing the points multiple times or getting multiple xerox copies. Using modern technology

such

as computing devices, world wide web services, video-conferencing etc.

makes

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Makes

efficient use of the companies most valuable resources; its manpower. All data and information, with

help

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the help

of modern softwares on computers and smart phone, can be easily created, stored, and shared seamlessly with others over the internet.

Thus

making the

work

flow more efficient and productive.

However

, on the

contary

very opposed in nature or character or purpose

contrary

,

breakdown

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the breakdown

a breakdown

of these modern advancements may cause disruptions in the workflow. Like in case of courier company which relies

heavy

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heavily

on computers, phones etc.

would

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Would

find it difficult to track, monitor packages or even take new orders.

Such

heavy dependencies on technology would bring them to a grinding halt if their modern tools fail. In conclusion,

work places

a place where work is done

workplaces

should have a

balanced usage

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balanced, usable

balanced usable

of both modern technology as well as old methods of documentation and communication so as to reduce the impact of any serious breakdowns.