Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is true that some
minortiy
a group of people who differ racially or politically from a larger group of which it is a part
minority
languages may disappear in the near future.
Although
it can be argued that governments could save
money
by allowing
this
to
happehn
come to pass
happen
, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved. There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of
money
.
Fisrlty
Suggestion
Firstly
, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing.
This
momney
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
might be better spent on other public services.
Secondly
, it
wopuld
past tense of "will"
would
be much cheaper and more
effiecient
being effective without wasting time or effort or expense
efficient
fro
countires
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
counters
to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to
communicting
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communicating
connecting
with each
minorty
a group of people who differ racially or politically from a larger group of which it is a part
minority
group. Despite the
abover
at a higher position than
above
arguments, I
beli
shout loudly and without restraint
bellow
blew
value
,
Accept space
,
eve that
governmenets
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government
should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is öuch more than simply a mea of communication. It has
vital connection
Suggestion
a vital connection
with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If
alanguage
Suggestion
a language
disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the
ri
the syllable naming the second (supertonic) note of any major scale in solmization
re
,
Accept space
,
ch
(used of count nouns) every one considered individually
each
cultural diversity that makes societies more
ientersting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
. By spending
money
to protect
minortyi
a group of people who differ racially or politically from a larger group of which it is a part
minority
languages, governments can
also
preserve
tadeitions
an inherited pattern of thought or action
traditions
, customs and behaviours that are part of a
counrty's
(United Kingdom) a region created by territorial division for the purpose of local government
county
history. In conclusion, it may save
money
in the
sort
the location on a baseball field where the shortstop is stationed
short
term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term
this
would have an extremöely negative impact on our cultural heritageç.

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