You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager, in your letter:  Describe the training course you want to do  Explain what the company could do to help you  Say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir. I am writing
this
letter to help me to do an income
tax
course
from Chartered Institute of management accountant. Recently, I
seen
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saw
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the advertisement for
this
course
on their website. As you are aware that our
company
is Canada based and our new potential clients could be from
United
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the United

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State of America, where the
tax
regulations are different. I need
company's
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the company's

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help to complete
this
course
.
This
course
is quite expensive
moreover
, it required extra time and
efforts
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. If you could help me to sponsor
this
course
, it would be much appreciated. As
course
demand extra time but, I am planning to do it on weekend. So, it will not
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affect

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effect
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affect

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my working hours. The income
tax
course
will help me to learn different territorial
tax
regulations, as we are
expending
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expanding

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our business in
United
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the United

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state
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States

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of America.
This
skill would be beneficial for the
company
to grow. I am waiting for
the
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a

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postiive
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positive

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response from the
company
.
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Yours

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Your
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Yours

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faithfully, Mohsin.

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