The diagrams below shows incidents of theft in two states of a south American country from 1990 to 2000.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart expresses information about the statistic of thefts that follow in 2 states of a South American country over a period of 11 years.
Overall
, the graph reveals that the robbery incident was controlled by State
A whereas
State
B produce poor control over looting matter
and witnessed Fix the agreement mistake
matters
surprising
high numbers of Change the word
surprisingly
robbery
in the year 2000.
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robberies
In
1990 to 1996, the sum of witnessed nearly 500 incidents of Change preposition
From
thefts
in 1990Fix the agreement mistake
theft
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, as well as incidents,
as well as
incidents remained in the
500 till 1996 in Correct article usage
apply
State
A but State
B was rising steadily in
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to
the
850.In 1997, the total of incidents of fraud in 600 rise to fall down in Correct article usage
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coming
years and in Correct article usage
the coming
year
2000, Change the article
the year
State
A expressed lowest
figure of crime cases, which was around 370.
The theft rises Correct article usage
the lowest
in
780 in Change preposition
to
State
B and remained in the similar 3 periods. Later, in 1994, they rose drastically to over 1000. After going down to almost 800 for
1995 and 1996, theft matter constantly kept rising at an alarming rate for the following years and touched a high Change preposition
in
if
1800 in the year 2000.Correct your spelling
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