Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to request renovation services for the road in front of my house as it was broken because of the rain last
year and I hope you will be able to support in
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this
issue.
First
, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Lama, I am living in Jabriya, block 6, street
111 since 2013 because this
is a comfortable area provided with all services.Also
, my family is living in the same area, but on a different street
so I will never think to change my place of living.
Second
, street
111 in Jabriya is one of the best streets in the area as it has two traffic lights and a
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However
, since last
year the street
was damaged and no clear lanes are available because of the rain.Furthermore
, there are a lot of deep holes and this
is causing various accidents daily.
Third
, I guess it will be a good idea to renovate this
street
as soon as possible because the last
incident was harsh and one person died in the
car accident.
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Finally
, I would appreciate it if you could help with this
issue and raise it to
the engineering department to start working on it.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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