Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to request renovation services for the road in front of my house as it was broken because of the rain

last

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year and I hope you will be able to support

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issue.

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, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Lama, I am living in Jabriya, block 6,

street

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111 since 2013 because

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is a comfortable area provided with all services.

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, my family is living in the same area, but on a different

street

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so I will never think to change my place of living.

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111 in Jabriya is one of the best streets in the area as it has two traffic lights and

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good walking pavement.

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, since

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year the

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was damaged and no clear lanes are available because of the rain.

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, there are a lot of deep holes and

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is causing various accidents daily.

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, I guess it will be a good idea to renovate

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street

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as soon as possible because the

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incident was harsh and one person died in

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car accident.

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, I would appreciate it if you could help with

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issue and raise it

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the engineering department to start working on it. Yours faithfully, Lama Jaljouli

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Grievance
Deterioration
Hazardous
Impede
Inconvenience
Potholes
Cracks
Collapsed
Uneven
Detour
Repair
Maintenance
Investigation
Infrastructure
Expenditure
Resolution
Improvement
Community
Resident
Safety
Convenience
Traffic congestion
Civic
Enquiry

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Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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