The diagram below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart provides the information modes of transport and year chosen by
percentage
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the percentage
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of
travellers
in a European country
from
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between
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1950 and 1990.
Overall
, the graph reveals that in modes
chose
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chosen
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of
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by
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most of the
people
car of
travellers
since 1990,
while
the
bikes
and foot were
people
was
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travelled by over the two periods and
slightly
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slight
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change in modes of transport used by
bus
. As can be seen from the chart reveals that 20% person
chosen
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chose
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by
bus
in 1950,
while
car 8%
and
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apply
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bikes
32%, and 40%
people
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of people
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selected
by
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apply
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walking, but, the least of
people
used
to
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apply
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bikes
and walking in 1990 and the contrast period of 17%
people
prefer to walk. In 1970, the
amount
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number
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of
people
sharply inclined 32%
travelled
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travelling
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by
bus
and 28%
travelled
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travelling
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by
cars
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car
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,
while
, the used by the
people
declined
22
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by 22
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% travelled by
bikes
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bike
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. The below period used in
travellers
inclined, but the period declined in 23%
people
chose the other transport system. In 1990, the graph showed the number of
most
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apply
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people
used
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who used
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to travel by car,
while
the mode chosen
approximately
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was approximately
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17% by
bus
, and
bikes
and walking were opted for, by around 10% of
travellers
each.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words travellers, people, bikes, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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