The diagram below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in a European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart provides the information modes of transport and year chosen by
percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
travellers
in a European country from
1950 and 1990.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, the graph reveals that in modes chose
Wrong verb form
chosen
of
most of the Change preposition
by
people
car of travellers
since 1990, while
the bikes
and foot were people
was
travelled by over the two periods and Unnecessary verb
apply
slightly
change in modes of transport used by Change the word
slight
bus
.
As can be seen from the chart reveals that 20% person chosen
by Wrong verb form
chose
bus
in 1950, while
car 8% and
Correct word choice
apply
bikes
32%, and 40% people
selected Change preposition
of people
by
walking, but, the least of Change preposition
apply
people
used to
Change preposition
apply
bikes
and walking in 1990 and the contrast period of 17% people
prefer to walk.
In 1970, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
sharply inclined 32% travelled
by Wrong verb form
travelling
bus
and 28% travelled
by Wrong verb form
travelling
cars
, Fix the agreement mistake
car
while
, the used by the people
declined 22
% travelled by Change preposition
by 22
bikes
. The below period used in Fix the agreement mistake
bike
travellers
inclined, but the period declined in 23% people
chose the other transport system.
In 1990, the graph showed the number of most
Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
used
to travel by car, Correct pronoun usage
who used
while
the mode chosen approximately
17% by Add a missing verb
was approximately
bus
, and bikes
and walking were opted for, by around 10% of travellers
each.Submitted by bachchanaznin on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travellers, people, bikes, bus with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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