In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

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Positive Aspects
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Pre-owned garments
  • Affordable
  • Vintage
  • Mainstream
  • Mass-produced
  • Online marketplaces
  • Self-expression
  • Recycling
  • Consumption model
  • Hygiene issues
  • Counterfeit products
  • Cultural shift
  • Materialism
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