You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •say how your work could be done while you are away •ask for his/her help in arranging it,

Dear Sir, I recently heard that our company is providing a great option for a few Data scientists to work in the headquarters. I am elated to explore

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opportunity, and I would like to request your assistance to get

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offer

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the necessary arrangements required.

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, it has always been a dream of mine to work in our main office. I believe that it will enhance my career and prove myself in front of the CEO and COO.

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, one of our senior data scientists secured a similar offer, and later, he received a promotion as the divisional lead of the finance department. If you have any doubts about filling my vacancy for those six months, I will provide a plan that we can work together to execute. I will split my main tasks into subtasks and assign them to our team members evenly.

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, please consider my request and help me to do the essential things well in advance for

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business trip. I hope you accept my desire and provide me with a positive response at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Pratheep

pratheep309

Jul 15, 2025

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Make sure to clearly explain your reasons in a more detailed way.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear link words to connect your ideas better.

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Ensure you maintain a professional tone throughout your letter.

positive

You expressed your request clearly and politely.

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You provided a good example of someone who benefited from a similar opportunity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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