A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others agree that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons and relevant examples.

In recent times we have been hearing
alot
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a lot
about the rights of animals. There is a group of people who thinks that
anomals
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
should
b
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
etreared
to come or go into
entered
just like human beings, on the
otherhand we
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other hand, we
other hand we
have another group which thinks hat animals can be used as other lifeless things.
this
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This
essay will illuminate
bothe
two things or people together
both
the viewpoints.
To begin
with,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would throw some light on the views of the people who think that animals should be treated like human beings.
there
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There
are
lot
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lots
of reasons which support
these argument
Suggestion
this argument
these arguments
.
Firstly
, animals
experience
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experiences
same pain
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the same pain
as human beings when they are physically harmed,
resarches
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
researches
ahve
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
proved
this
.
some
Suggestion
Some
people argue that human beings superior to all
the animals so,
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the animals, so
animals can be used for the
batterment
a change for the better; progress in development
betterment
of human life.
Howeve most
Accept comma addition
However, most
However most
of the
aniniamls
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
are sacrificed for cosmetic testing. The number of animals which are used for medical experiments are very few.
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
,
lets
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let's
talk about the view
piont
a geometric element that has position but no extension
point
which supports the idea that animals should be used for
food
and research.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of
all if
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all, if
people will not consume animals, we are going to have
animal population explosion
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an animal population explosion
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, to keep
animal number
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animal numbers
the animal number
under control, they are supposed to consume. Animals are
big source
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a big source
of
food
.
if
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If
we eliminate eating animals, there is going to be a huge
food
shortage.
human being
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The human being
Human being
is superior to all
the animals so,
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the animals, so
if
experiment
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an experiment
on
animals invent
Accept comma addition
animals, invent
a new medication or
vaccin
immunogen consisting of a suspension of weakened or dead pathogenic cells injected in order to stimulate the production of antibodies
vaccine
, it
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be done. TO summarise
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would say that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
dont
do not
don't
agree with the idea that animals
shiuld
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be
udsed
employed in accomplishing something
used
for human
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
.
as
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As
far as
food
is concerned eve science has proved that
vegetarianis
Suggestion
vegetarian is
is very good diet and we get all
tha
definite article
the
that
nutrients from
vegetarian diet
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vegetarian diets
a vegetarian diet
. Human beings should not be
toocruel
Suggestion
too cruel
.
they
Suggestion
They
should feel the pain of animals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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