A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others agree that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons and relevant examples.

In recent times we have been hearing

alot

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a lot

about the rights of animals. There is a group of people who thinks that

anomals

a living organism characterized by voluntary movement

animals

should

b

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

be

etreared

to come or go into

entered

just like human beings, on the

otherhand we

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other hand, we

other hand we

have another group which thinks hat animals can be used as other lifeless things.

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this

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This

essay will illuminate

bothe

two things or people together

both

the viewpoints.

To begin

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with,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would throw some light on the views of the people who think that animals should be treated like human beings.

there

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There

are

lot

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lots

of reasons which support

these argument

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this argument

these arguments

.

Firstly

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, animals

experience

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experiences

same pain

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the same pain

as human beings when they are physically harmed,

resarches

a scientist who devotes himself to doing research

researchers

researches

ahve

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

have

proved

this

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.

some

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Some

people argue that human beings superior to all

the animals so,

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the animals, so

animals can be used for the

batterment

a change for the better; progress in development

betterment

of human life.

Howeve most

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However, most

However most

of the

aniniamls

a living organism characterized by voluntary movement

animals

are sacrificed for cosmetic testing. The number of animals which are used for medical experiments are very few.

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secondly

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Secondly

,

lets

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let's

talk about the view

piont

a geometric element that has position but no extension

point

which supports the idea that animals should be used for

food

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and research.

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first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

of

all if

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all, if

people will not consume animals, we are going to have

animal population explosion

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an animal population explosion

.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

, to keep

animal number

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animal numbers

the animal number

under control, they are supposed to consume. Animals are

big source

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a big source

of

food

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.

if

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If

we eliminate eating animals, there is going to be a huge

food

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shortage.

human being

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The human being

Human being

is superior to all

the animals so,

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the animals, so

if

experiment

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an experiment

on

animals invent

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animals, invent

a new medication or

vaccin

immunogen consisting of a suspension of weakened or dead pathogenic cells injected in order to stimulate the production of antibodies

vaccine

, it

shoud

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be done. TO summarise

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would say that

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

dont

do not

don't

agree with the idea that animals

shiuld

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be

udsed

employed in accomplishing something

used

for human

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

.

as

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As

far as

food

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is concerned eve science has proved that

vegetarianis

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vegetarian is

is very good diet and we get all

tha

definite article

the

that

nutrients from

vegetarian diet

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vegetarian diets

a vegetarian diet

. Human beings should not be

toocruel

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too cruel

.

they

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They

should feel the pain of animals.