The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart illustrates, the ratio of men, women and children who consumed five proportions of fruits and vegetables every day in these 8 years between 2001 and 2008 in the United Kingdom.
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adolescents constantly remained the lowest proportion of eating healthy fruits and vegetables.
In 2001, ladies have eaten 22% of the vegetables and fruits. After Correct article usage
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the young age people were about 18%. Male consumption raised in 2006 to 28% and it also
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