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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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It is widely known that the threat of nuclear weapons provide the peace all over the world.
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, it is a good source of cheap and clean energy. Even though the benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the disadvantages, there are always some risks that should be taken into account. In
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 essay I will outline drawbacks of using nuclear
power
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 and evaluate its significance Even though, nuclear energy is cheap and clean, building nuclear
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station
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 cost huge amount of money and time. Usually it is money of
tax payers
someone who pays taxes
taxpayers
, who can't participate in making so important decision like building
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nuclear power plants
a nuclear power plant
power
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 plant. It results in building
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a nuclear power station
nuclear power stations
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 by only rich countries. Another disadvantage is that it is very dangerous to build and maintain nuclear
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 because even
small mistake
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a small mistake
 of
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personals
the personal
 can lead to
big catastrophe
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a big catastrophe
 with numerous people death...It is another reason why the population should participate in making so important decision to build nuclear
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station
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. Usually rich countries to provide safety to their
countries locate
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countries to locate
 these plants in poor countries which cause big dissatisfaction. To sum up, even though nuclear
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station
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 is expensive to build and dangerous to maintain, if all negative sides will be minimized only advantages can be seen by
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the population
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrence
  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
  • Rogue states
  • Radioactive waste disposal
  • Catastrophic accidents
  • Climate change
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