Many people today find that the cost of attaining a University-level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the causes of this situation, and how can governments, Universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?

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While many young people aspire to
attending
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attend
University, the expense involved can be prohibitive in some cases. The causes of
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appear to be focussed on three areas, and a number of solutions
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appear to be possible. Perhaps the major factor here is the reduction in government subsidy for University courses.
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, in the UK,
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courses were virtually free to the student until recently, but now
cost
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around £30,000 per year.
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pattern appears to be global, with the result that students and their families need to meet the costs directly. Another cause is the increasing
cost
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of living in many countries, meaning that the
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of day to day life (
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to fees) can be almost overwhelming for students. A
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factor is the difficulty in finding part-time work while a student is studying.
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work tends to be poorly paid, while taking up time that students should use for their studies. Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be to restore some element of state funding to courses.
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public budgets are under pressure these days, if we took
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step it would greatly enhance access to courses for people on lower incomes. A
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remedy might be for the Universities
to offer
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offer
shorter courses, or more courses with an element of professionally paid work experience included. If
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courses were more available, it would reduce the issue of living expenses to some extent.
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, students themselves should perhaps be more flexible in their attitude to education, and consider attending
University
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the University
at a later stage, or possibly only when they have accumulated sufficient funds to support themselves. In summary, the factors of funding and
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of living appear to be the main causes. A coordinated response by the state, the institutions and the individuals may well lessen the severity of the situation.
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