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Some people think that all university student should study whatever they want. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #university #student #study #future #science #technology
Some
educationalist
 believes that university
student
 should be taken the option to learn whatever they want. Others argue that the
student
 must be study some fundamental
subject
 that can be useful in the
future
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future, such
such
 as math, chemistry, physics, engineering etc. In
this
 following essay, I am going to examine
this
 question from both points of view and provide my overall opinion. At the very outset, there are lots of
argument
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arguments
 in support to select
subject
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subjects
 for the
student
. Whenever
student
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a student
the student
have
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has
 a clear plan about the career by the based on a specific
subject
then
 it could be benefited.
For example
, If any
student
 find out the English
subject
 as a career as well as build up the communication skill, writing skill
then
this
subject
 will help
for
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in
 taking
job
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the job
. What is more,
student
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students
the student
 can send
thir
of them or themselves
their
 CV world top list company
such
 as Alibaba Group, amazon.
com
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Chrome
Com
 and Google. Because we know that top list company they always want those types of
student
 who have depth knowledge about English. One the other hand, it is
also
 possible to make the opposing case. Science or technology related
subject
 is needed for making a car, robots or modern building. Whenever any
student
 they will complete their higher education from the university by following that
subject
 after that they will not suffer lack of job. Due to fact of many companies they make campaign to the eminent
university
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university, then
then
 they take those types of
student
 who have great CGPA about engineering or science related
subject
. In conclusion, according to what has been discussed above, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel very strongly that if
student
 choice their
subject
 as they want if would be better.
This
 is because now every
student
know
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knows
 better about the career path compare with
previous decade
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the previous decade
previous decades
.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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