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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros and cons?

#machine #work #automation
By the blessing of modern
technology now we
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technology, now we
 use many kinds of automated
machine
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machines
such
 as robots, faster-producing
machine
 regarding of office,
industry
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industrial
, home and many more. I believe that
this
 is
more positive impact
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a more positive impact
 rather than negative impact, which I shall highlight in
this
 essay. On the positive side, by using robots many car companies can make lots of
car
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cars
 with great portion without
lost
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losing
 time and
energy whereas
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energy, whereas
 manpower cannot do it so, automated
machine
 important for that country.
As a result
, it boosts the economic circle. What is
more by
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more, by
more buy
more buy buy
, from getting the company
tax government
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tax, government
 would use
this
 money for making new infrastructure, hospital, and many more.
Secondly
, according to the
doctor
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doctor's
 statement, some
surgery
 is
critical it
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critical, it
 not possible able to do
by
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with
 the doctor
such
 as brain
surgery
, cornea
surgery
, to do
this
works
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work
 robotic
surgery
 is needed. Due to fact of computer can do it the proper way. On the negative side, too much using robotics and many automated machines for making more output it might be exacerbated.
This
 is because many people could not find out the job field as they want.
As a result
, both social and employment problem day by day will be increased. In conclusion, according to what has been discussed above, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel very strongly that it has more positive
result
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resulted
 compare to the negative side.
This
 is because robots, modern
machine
 increasing our economic condition and many more activates whereas man cannot nothing to do.
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