Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros and cons?

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By the blessing of modern

technology now we

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technology, now we

use many kinds of automated

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machine

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machines

such

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as robots, faster-producing

machine

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regarding of office,

industry

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industrial

, home and many more. I believe that

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more positive impact

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a more positive impact

rather than negative impact, which I shall highlight in

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essay. On the positive side, by using robots many car companies can make lots of

car

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cars

with great portion without

lost

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losing

time and

energy whereas

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energy, whereas

manpower cannot do it so, automated

machine

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important for that country.

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, it boosts the economic circle. What is

more by

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more, by

more buy

more buy buy

, from getting the company

tax government

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tax, government

would use

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money for making new infrastructure, hospital, and many more.

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, according to the

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doctor's

statement, some

surgery

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critical it

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critical, it

not possible able to do

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with

the doctor

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as brain

surgery

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, cornea

surgery

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, to do

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works

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work

robotic

surgery

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is needed. Due to fact of computer can do it the proper way. On the negative side, too much using robotics and many automated machines for making more output it might be exacerbated.

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is because many people could not find out the job field as they want.

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, both social and employment problem day by day will be increased. In conclusion, according to what has been discussed above, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance,

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, I feel very strongly that it has more positive

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resulted

compare to the negative side.

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is because robots, modern

machine

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increasing our economic condition and many more activates whereas man cannot nothing to do.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros and cons?

Fully explain your ideas

Today, many people do not know their neighburs in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?