Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros and cons?

#machine #work #automation

By the blessing of modern

technology now we

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technology, now we

use many kinds of automated

machine

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machines

such

as robots, faster-producing

machine

regarding of office,

industry

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industrial

, home and many more. I believe that

this

more positive impact

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a more positive impact

rather than negative impact, which I shall highlight in

this

essay. On the positive side, by using robots many car companies can make lots of

car

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cars

with great portion without

lost

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losing

time and

energy whereas

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energy, whereas

manpower cannot do it so, automated

machine

important for that country.

As a result

, it boosts the economic circle. What is

more by

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more, by

more buy

more buy buy

, from getting the company

tax government

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tax, government

would use

this

money for making new infrastructure, hospital, and many more.

Secondly

, according to the

doctor

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doctor's

statement, some

surgery

critical it

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critical, it

not possible able to do

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with

the doctor

such

as brain

surgery

, cornea

surgery

, to do

this

works

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work

robotic

surgery

is needed. Due to fact of computer can do it the proper way. On the negative side, too much using robotics and many automated machines for making more output it might be exacerbated.

This

is because many people could not find out the job field as they want.

As a result

, both social and employment problem day by day will be increased. In conclusion, according to what has been discussed above, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel very strongly that it has more positive

result

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resulted

compare to the negative side.

This

is because robots, modern

machine

increasing our economic condition and many more activates whereas man cannot nothing to do.

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