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There is a common belief that individuals working under physical pressure should receive the same wage as educated people with diploma. Personally, I agree with this statement. A number of arguments support my opinion.

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To begin
 with, there is a fine line between salaries of different walks of life and there is no need to rise
wage
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 because it is correctly distributed.
For instance
, some workers in the factories or docks
work
 under severe
work
 conditions, like loading heavy cargoes, while their bosses control the whole situation merely by ordering and signing some papers.
This
 is because of prese
nce of a
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the presence
 mind and education. It would be unfair towards chiefs if their employees will receive the same amount of money as themselves.
Additionally
, even professional boxers used to fight and receive a little by putting their lives into risk until they reached a peak of fame and started to be paid highly.
On the other hand
, I believe that those who do physical
work
 should be paid in parallel with high degree people for some reasons. As sportsmen like football players and athletes
also
 do physical job it is fair to pay them equally with high ranked doctors.
For example
, sportsmen represent their countries in the international tournaments and Olymp
ic Games and
Suggestion
the Olympic Games
compete for the honor
of t
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
heir nation, while some medics face with the risks during working with experiments like curing patients with contagious diseases,
such
 as CoViD-19. In
this
 cases
, the
Suggestion
case
ir efforts could be regarded as the aid to the development of the nation and
that is
 why should be paid on par. In conclusion, I reiterate my view by saying that peopl
e invo
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the people
lved with physical
work
 should be paid evenly as educated individuals regardless of educational background, social and economic boundaries.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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