The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
There are two pie charts, the first shows the various usages of electricity by Australian
household
and the Fix the agreement mistake
households
second
one shows the emissions
of greenhouse gas.
It can be noticed that the major consumption of energy
goes to heating and water heating ( 42% and 30% respectively). Other appliances account for 15% of the total energy
consumption. The least energy
is used for cooling (2%) and lighting (4%). There is 7% consumed by refrigeration which is slightly more than that of cooling and lighting combined.
It is clear that
more than half of the greenhouse gas emissions
is
produced by only two categories, water heating ( 32% ) and other appliances (28%). The emission generated by Heating and refrigeration is almost Change the verb form
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(15%). Cooling and lighting Correct your spelling
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emissions
( 3% and 8% respectively )
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energy
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