The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant. Write at elast 150 words.
The picture below illustrates the
process
by which apples
are canned.
Overall
, the process
of canning the apples
is comprised of a number of steps. Whereas
procuring and preparation of the apples
for canning is made up of eight steps, the canning of these apples
into jars consists of only four steps.
The process
begins with the hand-picking of the apples
. After that, these apples
are transported by means of a truck. Before being sent to the cold storage, they are washed and then
quality checking is done. Next
, they are weighed using a weighing machine and graded. Before canning, the apples
are first peeled and then
cut into slices. These canned slices are later sealed and then
sent for cooking into
a boiler for sterilization. At Change preposition
in
this
point, These cans are labelled and then
sent for storing inside a storage facility. Finally
, the process
ends with the dispatching of the canned apples
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