Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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A clean body

yeilds

be the cause or source of

yields

a clear mind, but

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phrase just applies to oneself. Why

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cannot be followed for our surroundings?

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essay will provide my opinion on

importance

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the importance

of harmony and hygiene in

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home

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the home

and office. In my country it is said that an abode is a temple and main necessity is to keep a temple spot-free clean. The purpose of

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teaching explains that we should regularly clean our

house

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, maximum time is spent

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home

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doing chores, carrying out daily routine and sleeping. A dirty

house

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festers many rodents, pest as well as diseases, which can be life-

threatning

threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments

threatening

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, if everything is kept in

specific manner

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a specific manner

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

anyone living

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home

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can find their respective and common things easily.

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, it is called good practice to maintain

house

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cleaning habits for better living conditions. Apart from time spend at

home

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, we spend approximately 7 to 14 hours at work. Regardless of job position, every person has personal workspace which they need to tend in their own way. It is in human nature to forget things, after placing it. The best way to overcome

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problem is to organize. A disorganized desk or workplace may lead to loss of important documents or object.

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behaviour is frowned upon in many companies. In

medical field

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the medical field

, it is mandatory to sterilize every equipment and protective gear in order to work with patients. So, maintenance and

cleaniness

the habit of keeping free of superficial imperfections

cleanliness

go hand-in-hand when it comes to occupation.

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essay discussed the requirement of

organization

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the organization

and hygiene in

house

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and job place. I believe that well prepared is half done,

so to keep running

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so keep running

things

smoothly we

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smoothly, we

should maintain

cleaniness

the habit of keeping free of superficial imperfections

cleanliness

and organize our things properly.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

282 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

organised
clutter-free
productivity
mental clarity
efficiency
professionalism
first impressions
ergonomics
aesthetically pleasing
compulsive neatness
functional space
minimising distractions
systematic arrangement
time management
work-life balance
streamline
feng shui
optimal performance

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.