The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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As time goes by, the
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of cars increases rapidly in all the
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, especially in British, and several new sorts of transportation systems have appeared.
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, if the governments are not able to rule the system, a huge
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of difficulties will start to appear. I strongly agree with
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point of view due to the horrible impact that will affect the peoples' lives and the
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development.
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of all, there are several reasons why the governments should focus on the road system,
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the
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of cars and the
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of people that are using them. If governments have not given any attention to that, problems like traffic jam and
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accidents will increase.
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, according to some researches, the average of the cars in 2000 in British was about 29 millions cars, that means it had increased sharply between 1888 and 2000, so if the country have not paid attention for
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thing, the
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accident will be increased in the future along with the
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of the victims.
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to that, it will be more and more difficult for the country to control the
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after it have increased, so, if they started from now and put some low to supervision ownership, things will be easier. The
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reason why it is important to encourage people to use other sorts of transportations, is that the country will not develop.
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, the railway system has a huge effect on the peoples' life due to its ability to save their time and providing them more comfortable way for mobility.
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of
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, people will start to avoid using cars and began to depend on the railways, so their life will go faster and the
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will develop in a quicker way. In conclusion,
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the
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of cars is still increasing, there are many possible ways to control it, like providing people new types of transport and putting some laws to rule the
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ownership.
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the countries have not done an immediate reaction, problems
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as, traffic jam, vehicle accidents and retreating in the
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development will appear.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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