Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned where as others think that change is inevitable, banning tourism has no benefit. Discuss both sides n give your opinion

Tourism

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is ever growing industry. When tourists and city

dewellers

a person who inhabits a particular place

dwellers

interact they have a chance of

mutual interaction

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the mutual interaction

of

culture

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, religion and

language

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. Some people argue that

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can led

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can lead

to the loss of cultural

heritage

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of that area, so

tourism

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should be banned in some areas while others think that

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is not appropriate for the society.

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with supporters of banning

tourism

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suggest that tourists belonging to different ethics and

culture

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, visiting some of the areas have

influence

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influenced

city dwellers through their

culture

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,

language

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and religion. People tend to

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

their style and their influx promote foreign

language

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, people tend to learn

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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

speak foreign languages rather than their native

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.

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eventually led to the loss of cultural

heritage

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. They consider tourist as inciting factors for

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change. While others state that

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change is certain to happen, banning

tourism

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will not

effect

the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion

affect

. In

fact banning

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fact, banning

tourism

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will have devastating effects on

countrys economy

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the country's economy

country's economy

a country's economy

countries economy

and for locals too. There are many areas whose economy

soley

without any others being included or involved

solely

depends on

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.

Tourism

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opens up new doors of business and trade, brings harmony and peace to the area and promote globalization. In my opinion to preserve cultural

heritage

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is the responsibility of an individual and society themselves.

Its

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It's

their love and devotion that

perserve

keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last

preserve

their

culture

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,

for instance

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, we can have

example

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examples

the example

an example

of people of Kalash residing in

Chitral district

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the Chitral district

of Pakistan they

have responsibly inherit

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have responsibly inherited

and passed their

culture

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to their generation despite of

visitis

go to see a place, as for entertainment

visits

of thousands of

tourist

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tourists

annually. To recapitulate, to promote cultural

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heritage local

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heritage, local

government and responsible attitude of an attitude of an individual can play a

pivot

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pivotal

role without banning

tourism

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