You bought a football match ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the football tournament why you are unable to go how can your friend get the ticket

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Hi dear, I hope you are well. I’m writing

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letter to offer you a

ticket

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for the upcoming Football tournament

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apply

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since I can’t attend it myself. The tournament is going to be held at the Central

stadium

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on Monday and I got the

ticket

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for the inaugural match. The match is between

United

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the United

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club and Soccer’s club, two strong contestants. I'm sure you are going to have the best time of your life. I have been counting the days to attend

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event, but unfortunately, I have to attend another important family function on the same day, which I can’t miss. Sadly, the function place is

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the

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apply

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Delhi, to where

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I will be leaving with my family on the day after tomorrow. So, I’ll be out of the state for

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week and I’m unable to use

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spectacular opportunity. If you are interested, I’m willing to give you the

ticket

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for free. You can come to my house any time after 6: 30 pm and I’ll be happy to give you the

ticket

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, I can bring it on Friday if you are coming to the temple

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week. Please let me know whether you would like the

ticket

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or not. With love, Sharanya Sharma

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

208 words

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You bought a football match ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the football tournament why you are unable to go how can your friend get the ticket

The Closing

The population of major cities around the world is increasing very fastly. Why is this the case and what measures could be taken to solve this issue.

Nowaday, it is common to have marriage and children in their thirties rather than in younger age. What is cause behind this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion.