The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides the data about
market
share of the notebook computer Add an article
the market
market
all over the world of companies
within a year
from 2006 to 2007. By and large, this
market
was dominated by six companies
, among them
HP was the one which accounted for the largest part.
Toshiba, Lenovo and Fujisu-Seimens are producers which made up Add a comma
,them
for
the minority proportion of Change preposition
apply
notebook
computer Correct article usage
the notebook
market
in 2006 with 6.2%, 6.6% and 4.8% respectively. Toshiba, however
, enjoyed a considerable increase in market
share to 7.3% in the next
year
, whereas
two others
Correct pronoun usage
other
companies
suffered a sharp decline.
Of three
biggest manufacturers, Acer was the only one which experienced a decrease in their sales. Correct article usage
the three
By contrast
, the percentage of Dell rocketed from 16% to 20.2% in this
period, this
was also
the most appreciable increase recorded. 2007 was the year
witnessing the domination of HP in the market
, which is supported by the fact that over one-third
products
in the world were theirs.
There is 22.8% of the Change preposition
of products
market
share distributed by other companies
in 2006. In the next
year
, the number of those dropped 3.5
% to 19.3% which was drastically less than those of Dell Change preposition
by 3.5
as well as
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Vocabulary: Replace the words market, companies, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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