The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie chart represents the use of
energy
by an average Australian household and Use synonyms
emission
of Correct article usage
the emission
greenhouse
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gas
from the use of Use synonyms
energy
respectively.
An average Australian household uses the highest amount of Use synonyms
energy
(42%) for heating Use synonyms
while
water heating consumes 30% of Linking Words
energy
. Refrigeration, lighting, and cooling consume 7%, 4% and 2% of Use synonyms
energy
. Use synonyms
Thus
cooling consumes the least amount of Linking Words
energy
and the other appliances consume 15% of Use synonyms
energy
.
Every Use synonyms
energy
used caused the emission of Use synonyms
greenhouse
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gas
. Use synonyms
According to
the Linking Words
second
chart, refrigeration and lighting contribute 14% and 8% of Linking Words
greenhouse
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gas
even though they consume only 7% and 4% of Use synonyms
energy
. Water heating adds 32% of the total Use synonyms
greenhouse
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gas
emissions Use synonyms
while
heating adds Linking Words
for
15% of the emissions. Change preposition
apply
While
other appliances used only 15% of the Linking Words
energy
they produced 28% of the total Use synonyms
greenhouse
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gas
emissions. Use synonyms
Thus
, water heating contributes to the highest Linking Words
greenhouse
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gas
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while
lighting shares the lowest.Linking Words
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