The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie chart represents the use of
energy
by an average Australian household and emission
of Correct article usage
the emission
greenhouse
gas
from the use of energy
respectively.
An average Australian household uses the highest amount of energy
(42%) for heating while
water heating consumes 30% of energy
. Refrigeration, lighting, and cooling consume 7%, 4% and 2% of energy
. Thus
cooling consumes the least amount of energy
and the other appliances consume 15% of energy
.
Every energy
used caused the emission of greenhouse
gas
. According to
the second
chart, refrigeration and lighting contribute 14% and 8% of greenhouse
gas
even though they consume only 7% and 4% of energy
. Water heating adds 32% of the total greenhouse
gas
emissions while
heating adds for
15% of the emissions. Change preposition
apply
While
other appliances used only 15% of the energy
they produced 28% of the total greenhouse
gas
emissions. Thus
, water heating contributes to the highest greenhouse
gas
while
lighting shares the lowest.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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