The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie chart represents the use of
energy
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by an average Australian household and
emission
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the emission
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of
greenhouse
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gas
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from the use of
energy
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respectively. An average Australian household uses the highest amount of
energy
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(42%) for heating
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water heating consumes 30% of
energy
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. Refrigeration, lighting, and cooling consume 7%, 4% and 2% of
energy
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.
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cooling consumes the least amount of
energy
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and the other appliances consume 15% of
energy
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. Every
energy
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used caused the emission of
greenhouse
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gas
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.
According to
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the
second
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chart, refrigeration and lighting contribute 14% and 8% of
greenhouse
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gas
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even though they consume only 7% and 4% of
energy
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. Water heating adds 32% of the total
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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heating adds
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15% of the emissions.
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other appliances used only 15% of the
energy
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they produced 28% of the total
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions.
Thus
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, water heating contributes to the highest
greenhouse
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gas
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while
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lighting shares the lowest.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "thus, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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