Some people think that public health of a country can be improved if the government make laws regarding nutritious food but other think that it is the matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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, healthy lifestyle depends upon a balanced diet, but in the present days majority of people rely on unhealthy foods.

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lots of persons reckon that the government should impose strict laws for providing better feed products,

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the rest of masses consider that it depends on the people to eat according to their choice. In following piece of writing, I will throw light on both views along with my opinion.

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of all, there are myriads of reasons for higher authority's responsibility towards making strong rules regarding nutritious diet, but the most prominent one is that, most of the restaurants, street vendors and hotels used low quality products to make cuisines, which is dangerous for the health of people.

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, these types of products leads to human in deadly ailments

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as cancer, heart problems.

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regime should make strict rules against it.

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, a survey by WHO which reveals that 35% persons suffered from cancer due to overuse of junk food.

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, the government

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also impose

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higher taxes on products that are unhealthy for the body, by

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way, people give less attention to these products, because of heavy cost. On the contrast, most of the people

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opine that it is the individual's responsibility and own preference to choose the meal.

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, in hectic life schedule, every person has no enough time to make their own fare at home,

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they preferred to eat outside,

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they know that these types of cuisines are unhealthy for them.

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, the new generation

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gets addicted to the junk food and they don't prefer to eat homemade dishes.

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, in

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last couple

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of years, there are lots of restaurants open in each and every city, due to the burgeoning in the demand for

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products. In a nutshell, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one reach to a conclusion that the government should make strict and steady laws for providing a balanced diet

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each and every citizen.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

331 words

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Some people think that public health of a country can be improved if the government make laws regarding nutritious food but other think that it is the matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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When a new town is planned, it is more important to Public Park and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the past, knowledge was primarily contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about advantages and disadvantages of each view point?