what is my favourite sport? please descirbe it, explain why do you like it ?

My favourite sport is
slacklining
the evasion of work or duty
slacking
. It makes me so excited because it’s a risky activity. I‘ve started since I was 15. At
first
, I thought I could do it because my parents said that it’s so dangerous but I decided to do it. I registered in a sports club and
toke
the income or profit arising from such transactions as the sale of land or other property
take
took
up the challenge. I jumped at the chance to walk on a rope and now when I do
this
sport, I acquire a taste for it. I have a whale of a time when I am on a narrow fabric and I just think I can achieve my
ambitious
Suggestion
ambition
ambitions

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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