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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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I do not feel that entertainers
such
 as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much
money
 because the payment which they get it is very difficult for a normal person to earn, it takes a
lot
 of
parctice
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
 and good amount of work to earn that much of
money
Suggestion
the money
.
For example
, if you tell a normal person to act in front of thousand people
he
Suggestion
He
 will not be able to, because these actors have those guts to perform in front of a thousand people and the media.Even if they fail to do that performance they have to try until the director of the film is happy with the act.These actors they work for continuous hours, which includes 8 to 10 hours of make up, just sitting on
one
 chair for hours. They earn a
lot
 of
money
 by losing a
lot
 of sweat and sacrifices, and at the end they deserve respect and a bit of
money
, which we all do.
One
 of the most important
thing
Suggestion
things
 that
tey
people in general
they
 are paid a
lot
 because of their talent a film star is good at action or may be to do comedy, a musician is famous because of his voice and a sport star is popular because of the way he
palys
participate in games or sport
plays
 sports. Another job that should be highly paid is a public teacher, and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 guess there is no explanation required why? But
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think that public teacher should be paid more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 he receives because they are the
one
 who teaches a child from A to Z, they are the
one
 who help you make
ypur
of you or yourself
your
 future, they are the
one
 who teaches you manners and how to behave
,
Accept space
,
and a
lot
 more
that is
 not possible for a normal person to teach.

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