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Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?

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Many people believe that having a knowledge of another
language
 will give them endless opportunities. Some people insist that to learn another
language there
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language, there
 is no need to leave your home
country
, whilst
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 say that it is a must. İn my opinion, one to learn fluently a foreign
language
 they should consider to relocate to that
country
 for a few years. Living in another
country
 gives you an excellent opportunity to learn the
language
quicker
Suggestion
quickly
. You will have the chance to communicate with locals, and they can correct your grammar mistakes or improve your
prononsuation
the manner in which someone utters a word
pronunciation
. Everywhere you will go, that
language
 will be spoken,
thus
 you have no other choice but learn it. İf you can afford it, there are plenty of specialised
language
 classes available for foreigners which are taught by native speaking teachers so you can learn the
language
 from scratch. Some people after graduating from a college in their home
country
,
for example
 English teachers, decide to work for
couple
Suggestion
a couple
 of years abroad, because they want to learn to speak English without an accent. İt is much easier
this
 to happen if you live and work in England, USA or Australia. There you may be able to work in local schools and understand the
country
's teaching system. The libraries will give you an access to local newspapers and books that will help you to gain more knowledge of the
language
. Except the opportunity to learn the
language
 of
you
of you or yourself
your
 move to that
country
, you will certainly will experience the local culture and customs, that are as just as worth as learning the
language
.
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