The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A remarkable change has happened in the

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two decades in the women ‘s life.

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A situation

that has led to think that several troubles of

teenager

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a teenager

teenagers

is a consequence from the fact that mothers have quite

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worked

,

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they do not have time to stay at home to care for their

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

children's

.

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, I disagree with

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statement, due to young people should be a

resposibility

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

of both parents. While in the majority of

families children

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families, children

are

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closer

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to

their mothers,

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has happened

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to

the fact that women have shared more time with them, even

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from

their birth.

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, it is commonly believed that the care of a child is a responsibility of a woman, because, they will obey them more. Indeed, if the female side is not in a house

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could bring as a

consequense

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequence

that sons have a bad behaviour,

for get

dismiss from the mind; stop remembering

forget

the attention from their mothers.

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, there are many factors to explain the juvenile delinquency.

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one of them is the lack the attention from both parents, the most important is the capitalistic world in which we live nowadays.

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, people need more material goods to survive, so if they do not have the support economics and emotional from their families, likely they have to

commite

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

commit

commute

committee

some

delite

a feeling of extreme pleasure or satisfaction

delight

daylight

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. In conclusion, if we think that the breading is only

responsiblity

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

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of

women, we would be back as a society, because if we force to mothers to stay at home

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does not mean that juvenile

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delinquencies

decrease. Even the labour world would

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have

a low quality, because the female side is fundamental in the workplace.