An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?

I certainly the view.People should bear the
future
in mind and not
sqander
spend thoughtlessly; throw away
squander
slander
squandered
valuable everything to enjoy the present.They should always remember that the present would be changed into the
future
someday
,
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,
somehow it should be safety and secure eventually.Les us consider the reason why it it so crucial to be prepared well in
upcoming
Suggestion
the upcoming future
future
.
there
Suggestion
There
is a decline significantly in the mortality rate and the span of life has a tendency to
last
longer.But the period of time to earn
living
Suggestion
a living
is comparatively limited and
also
depends on their health.
Furthermore
the retirement of age is generally fixed
.
Accept space
.
One cannot definitely work indefinitely.
Thus
, during his span earning, they have to make sure that they set aside enough
money
to have a stable life in later years, when even they no longer have ability to work.
Moreover
,
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,
the expenditure on demands in their old age are sometime more than in their youth.Deteriorating health will surely lead to higher medical
bills or
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bills, or
hospital charges. Another factor is fairly important to
this
matter that some essential needs of the family.People
has
Suggestion
have
to provide
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
conditions in securing education and marriage expenses of the dependent member of the family
such
as children or grandchildren.
Besides
, they
also
pay their
insurance's
Suggestion
insurance
insurances
preminums
payment for insurance
premiums
and find a way out in order to live up to the fullest the needs of younger members or make end meet day-to-day.
meal
Suggestion
Meal
-to meal
,
Accept space
,
month-to-month till
such
time as they are employed and make
money
.There would
also
be usual expenses on house maintenance and repair or the payment personal or property taxes and other unexpected expenses like wedding or visiting relative, etc.. The society should
also
think about the
future
. It is extremely important to impose some rules or more strictly punishment onto the society so as to prevent social evils
.
Accept space
.
Most essentially
,
Accept space
,
expanding and building up
stronger education system
Suggestion
a stronger education system
and health
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
play
Suggestion
plays
a crucial role in developing a nation worthy of everyone's boundless promises.
Therefore
, people and society had better plan nicely for the
future
and they
also
take advantage of their youth to put aside enough
money
so that they can sit back and enjoy their life comfortably and secure them with better conditions in later years.If they are not able to save
money
enough
,
Accept space
,
then
the journey
ahead go
Accept comma addition
ahead, go
nowhere and perhaps could be deary indeed.

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