Task 2 : Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Nowadays, tourism is developing with the amazing speed emerging a trend of

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to places whose conditions are so tough, especially, the Sahara desert, the Amazon jungle or the Antarctic.

Although

there are reasons why people like to

visit

as they want to get new experience or have a

memoriable fantastic

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memorable, fantastic

memorable fantastic

adventure which can make them never forget, we

also

need to look at other effected factors

such

as broadening tourist’s minds, reduce travel costs or dangerous situations.

To begin

with the positive side, most people agree travel to the difficult

places perhaps

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places, perhaps

bring them more experience about the world especially the Sahara desert. By putting them self into the hard environment, we could automatically activate our original instincts to learn how to survive.

In addition

,

this

may save our budget up to fifty percent of the

tourist

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tour

cost. Obviously, we

also

need to prepare well to

visit

wonderful places,

for example

, the Antarctic, by equipping warm clothes, compasses and so on but it is more affordable than having a tour in a five

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star

hotel.

On the other hand

,

this

perhaps contains

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hazardous

effects to the tourist’s life. To illustrate

this

point, imagine a situation when having a

visit

to the Sahara desert, unfortunately, visitors are lost their

guidant

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Guidant

guidance

gradient

due to a terrible sandstorm. Unless they are clever at navigating, they will meet critical troubles

,

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,

for instance

, running out of water, being tired or even have illusions and dead in the worst case.

Therefore

, visiting to

wildest

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wilder

areas is

scacrely

only a very short time before

scarcely

a good idea for any beginners. In conclusion,

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

in difficult places not only brings us benefits

such

as opening our

mind

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minds

, being visionary, learning new things and saving money for travel,

this

also

contains criticism threatening our life whether we do not have a fair preparation.

Thus

, in my opinion, everyone who

intend

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intends

to have a

visit

these kind of

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landmarks should be concerned carefully.