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Task 2 : Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Nowadays, tourism is developing with the amazing speed emerging a trend of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to places whose conditions are so tough, especially, the Sahara desert, the Amazon jungle or the Antarctic.
Although
 there are reasons why people like to
visit
 as they want to get new experience or have a
memoriable fantastic
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memorable, fantastic
memorable fantastic
 adventure which can make them never forget, we
also
 need to look at other effected factors
such
 as broadening tourist’s minds, reduce travel costs or dangerous situations.
To begin
 with the positive side, most people agree travel to the difficult
places perhaps
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places, perhaps
 bring them more experience about the world especially the Sahara desert. By putting them self into the hard environment, we could automatically activate our original instincts to learn how to survive.
In addition
,
this
 may save our budget up to fifty percent of the
tourist
Suggestion
tour
 cost. Obviously, we
also
 need to prepare well to
visit
 wonderful places,
for example
, the Antarctic, by equipping warm clothes, compasses and so on but it is more affordable than having a tour in a five
stars
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star
 hotel.
On the other hand
,
this
 perhaps contains
hazard
Suggestion
hazardous
 effects to the tourist’s life. To illustrate
this
 point, imagine a situation when having a
visit
 to the Sahara desert, unfortunately, visitors are lost their
guidant
Suggestion
Guidant
guidance
gradient
 due to a terrible sandstorm. Unless they are clever at navigating, they will meet critical troubles
,
Accept space
,
for instance
, running out of water, being tired or even have illusions and dead in the worst case.
Therefore
, visiting to
wildest
Suggestion
wilder
 areas is
scacrely
only a very short time before
scarcely
 a good idea for any beginners. In conclusion,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 in difficult places not only brings us benefits
such
 as opening our
mind
Suggestion
minds
, being visionary, learning new things and saving money for travel,
this
also
 contains criticism threatening our life whether we do not have a fair preparation.
Thus
, in my opinion, everyone who
intend
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intends
 to have a
visit
 these kind of
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an area of lightness in a picture
highlighting
 landmarks should be concerned carefully.
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