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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievments and this sets a bad example to young people

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In recent decades, there is a little doubt that celebrities are popular with their wealth and allure
instead
 of their achievements. Some people argue that it has a bad impact to adolescents.
However
, I partially agree with the main idea.
This
 essay will analyse my personal perspective with an apt example.
First
 of all, it is undeniable that there are some celebrities who do not mind engaging in acts that typically considered disgraceful only to grab eyeballs.
For instance
; Paris Hilton, The Kardashian family, they are only well known due to their wealth and their family's reputation.They attend to award shows or talk shows in order to illustrate their fancy dresses, jewelleries and they do everything to keep fit even with the help of surgeries.
Moreover those
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Moreover, those
 celebrities encourage fake beauty, but no one is perfect and nobody can be.
In addition
, people tend to behave and learn from their stars, and when
their
people in general
they
 celebrities behave badly because of the insufficient education and lack of acknowledgement,
this
 may result in social evils in society of youngsters.
On the other hand
, some stars can be great role models for today's society as they teach people pertinent lesson.
Furthermore
, following their footprints can result in exploring their own talent which can show
further
 case marvels and brilliance. To recapitulate, the aforementioned effects plausible in favour of both views. From my point of view, there are some benefits of following the superstars
however it
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however, it
 cannot overshadow the egregious impacts.
That is
 why I believe that nowadays celebrities set as a bad role model for teenagers.
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