Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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World’s natural resources are losing rapidly.
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Tree
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The tree
A tree
is one of the natural resources that was
losing
Suggestion
lost
, it
damage
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damages
through natural disaster
such
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as weather, population or
felling
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
. We have to save the world;
tree
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plays an important role in
this
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world. Function of trees is huge. Trees produce oxygen, if the world without
tree
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no one can survive. In
forest
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the forest
a forest
, there are many kinds of plant, animal and insect that all reply on
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tree
Suggestion
the tree
to provide
place
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places
to live and fruit to eat, or even individual
tree
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type
have
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has
medication
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medicinal
purpose;
this
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enhance
Suggestion
enhances
regeneration to maintain balance of life cycle in the forest. Increasing animal types
also
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found disappeared as trees were destroyed by large scale of
felling
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
that people are
focus
Suggestion
focusing
focused
on how to make money by selling
tree
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; they have no more suitable environment to live, the animal living chain will be disconnected one day in the future.
Also
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,
tree
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’s root can protect anyone stay away from landslide, the root
tightly hold
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tightly holds
mountain soil to avoid soil and rock falling if heavy storm.
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Tree
Suggestion
The tree
also
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has fundamental element help people’s daily life.
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Tree
Suggestion
A tree
The tree
made paper, or different wood made products.
However
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, we have to find alternate substitution, natural resources is limited if we continue to felling and consume very fast, we
are not be
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have not been
able to catch up the speed as a mature
tree
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need many years to grow up.
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Tree
Suggestion
The tree
A tree
will disappear someday very soon!
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