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People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?

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Nowadays, it is quite common to see that people tend more towards
readymade
made for purchase and immediate use
ready-made
 cuisines than before. The primary reason behind eating
prepacked
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Prepacked
food
 is busy lifestyle and
this
 results
into
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in
occurance
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the occurrence
occurrence
occurrences
 of serious
health
 hazards among masses. The main factor behind
preference
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the preference
 of junk
food
 is because of the hectic schedule of population these days.
This
 is
only to due to
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only due to
 the fact that many people face heavy office workload during their working hours.
Consequently
, after getting free from their work, they feel tired and prefer to order snaked meals online.
In other words
, sometimes their body does not respond them to prepare dishes at home for themselves. At that time, they
choose
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chose
 the easiest way to get their meal ready.
For example
,
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,
 Zomato
food
 online home
delievery
the act of delivering or distributing something (as goods or mail)
delivery
 services are famous among generation as they find it more convenient and get their
food
 easily available in a single click of
button
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a button
.
On the other hand
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,
 eating these kinds of cuisines have some
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
 effects on human
health
. The market-made dishes are mostly comprised of harmful chemicals, colouring components
,
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,
 fats and spices
,
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,
 daily
cosumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
 of which leads to serious
health
 problems. Some of these are indigestion
,
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,
 obesity
,
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,
 hypertension
,
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,
 cardiovascular diseases
etcetera
. The study of Times India revealed that 70% of students who lives away from their homes
,
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,
 confront problems like fat
,
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,
 lack of digestion and hypertension only because of regular consumption of fast foods. In conclusion, market-prepared foods are highly adopted by modern society due to their busy day-time and owing to
this
 they face
health
 related problems
such
 as lack of digestion
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,
 skin related infections
,
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,
 body fat
,
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,
 increased tension level and heartaches.
Submitted by Gursharan Kaur on

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