The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
charts
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reveal the data
of
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sources of
eletricity
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electricity
generated for 4 states in the year 2003.
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, as
it
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apply
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can be seen from the
charts
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, India’s major
source
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is
fossil
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a fossil
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fuel
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,
while
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Morrocco
use
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mainly
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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.
According to
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charts
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, India’s primary
source
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is
fossil
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a fossil
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fuel
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with 82%; it is followed by
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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with
the
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rate of 14%. Nuclear
power
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is in a small minority for India with 4%. Unlike India, Sweden’s chief sources of electricity are
hyrdo
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hydro
power
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and nuclear
power
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and their rates are similar
with
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52% and 44%. Using fossil
fuel
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for
electricty
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electricity
is in a small
minoirty
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minority
in Sweden and its rate is 4%. There is
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a noticable
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noticable
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noticeable
noticeably
difference for Morocco which almost entirely consists of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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as an
electricty
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electricity
source
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. In Morocco, fossil
fuel
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usage for
eletricty
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electricity
significantly
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lower and its
ratie
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rate
ratio
is 5% and nuclear
power
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does not use
for
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an eletricity
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eletricity
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electricity
source
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in
this
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country.
Wietnam
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Vietnam
is similar
with
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to
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Sweden
as
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regarding
distribution
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the distribution
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of energy
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source
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sources
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apart from fossil fuels. As is shown in
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charts
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the charts
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, the
majoirty
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majority
of
eletricity
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electricity
source
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is
fossil
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a fossil
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fuel
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with more than half in Vietnam and the rest of
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source
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the source
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consists
hydropower
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of hydropower
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. Vietnam and Morocco
is
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the same in terms of not having nuclear
power
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words charts, source, fuel, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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