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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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 in the
world
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 has its roots embedded in
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history
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the history
 and evolution of a certain community. It is extremely fascinating to learn about the journey of a
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language
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. It is sad that few communities adopt new languages and eventually allow their
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owners
 to fade out. While I recognize the barriers that different languages present us with in
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 era of globalization but, I strongly disagree with the statement that fewer languages in the
world
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 make life easier since we can't afford to loose the
culture
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 and the
history
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 associated with them. Our
world
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 is multicultural which makes it unique, beautiful and
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 complex. The population of the
world
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 is scattered all over the globe and people who live in a certain region have developed their own medium of oral and written communication which is called as
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Language
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.
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 communication has given them the ability to create and maintain a society, law and order, rules and regulation, relations etc.,. Which has eventually shaped today's developed
world
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. It is crucial that we maintain a connection with the
history
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 and
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Language
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 is the only medium which can help us in
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 process.
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Language
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 plays a prominent role in reviving a
culture
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. People who speak their native
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language
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 feel connected with their
culture
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 and families.
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, a study conducted by the Linguistics society of India denotes that People who despite of speaking multiple languages feel connected with their family, extended family and
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 when they speak in their native
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language
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. As it is a well known fact that Man is a social animal,
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Language
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 helps a man feel connected with the society in which he grew up or his forefathers thrived in. There is a rich
culture
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 and
history
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 associated with all the languages associated with the
world
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 and when a
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language
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 dies, we loose the access to
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 priceless possessions of the past.
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 it is of utmost importance to restore and revive all the languages in the
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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