All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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Cars which operate from electric should be
replace
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replaced
instead
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of all other cars which incurred fossil fuels Simultaneously, all other cars should be stopped manufacturing other than electric cars. In my point of view, I incline to disagree
this
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statement as it creates lots of difficulties for the people of the society. As you are aware, there should be verity in selection for the people. Because people make their purchasing decisions based on different criteria,
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asthe
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as the
size, colour, type and
etc
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
etc.
:. They do not purchase a
car
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without searching information, even if the same model of
car
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they are using. They usually evaluate the alternatives before making the purchase decision. They will disappoint, if they cannot find any alternative models or brands in the market. Because attitudes and perceptions create a considerable impact on purchasing decision, even though it’s very difficult to change those factors. Nowadays, people do like Vitz, Honda, Toyota. They consider those cars are as luxurious cars. The
price
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of an electric
car
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is very high in Sri Lanka and there are no enough facilities (charging points) as well.Majority of the Sri Lankan people are from the middle class. Usually they purchase cars through acquiring a bank loan.
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the majority cannot afford these high
price
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cars. If it is going to ban the manufacturing of all other cars, the minority will be the only customers for electric cars. But it is needed to develop other facilities
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as charging points, spare parts
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to
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To
create the value for those customers. Normally
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price
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the price
of
a
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an
electric
car
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is higher than
normal
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a normal car
normal cars
the normal car
car
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. As
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an
example the
price
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of the “Vagon R” is about Rs. 20,000,000. But
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price
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the price
of the electric
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a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
car
chair
is three times higher than that where middle-income earners were unable to bear the cost. In conclusion, it is not a wise idea to ban
the all other cars
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all the other cars
instead
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of electric cars
because of people do
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because people do
like to alternatives. At the same time the cost of the electric
car
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is very high.
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people would not be able to bear the cost and their dream of having a
car
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will be lost.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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