Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Pupils study a variety of subjects at their
school including
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school, including
history
and
science
and
technology
. Some people opine
history
is the most significant among those while
other
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the other
chose
science
and
technology
is the vital one. Both of the views have proper logic, which will be revealed in the essay along with my own perception. There is no argument that,
history
comes from people’s real life stories which gives us idea about rights and wrongs. We can learn from
this
subject so that we can take proper decision to avoid
further
problem.
For example
, the
history
of previous world wars’ prohibits the world leaders to take any offensive decision against their rivals.
Besides
, it lets us know about
past
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the past
of the societies, previous social revolutions, causes behind
change
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the change
a change
of society and something more like these.
For example
, the
history
of ancient pyramid is related to aboriginal Egyptians that reflects
primitive culture
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a primitive culture
the primitive culture
and lifestyle of that country. If we rethink the other peoples’ view, we will get a lot of reasons backing up their concept.
Firstly
,
this
contemporary world is fully dependent on
science
and
technology
. Each and every
sectors
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sector
of our life
are relating
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are related
to
science
so that we cannot move a single step without it.
In addition
,
technology
needs to be developed with the race of global advancement. To exemplify, people need more food comparing to 50 years back as the population
have increased
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has increased
. But land area is same as the past;
therefore
using
technology
people cultivate double crops in the same land. These evidences propel people to select
science
and
technology
as the most important subject. Considering all grounds, to me,
science
and
technology
outweigh
history
as an important subject.
Nevertheless
,
history
provides us significant knowledge,
science
and
technology
leads us go
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leads us to go
ahead.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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