People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti social behviour and lack of respect for other. what might have caused this? How to improve this?

This

is fact, nowadays people are going away from our culture and values.

This

is essay will discuss on poverty of education and time. Those are main important to our society to reduce the anti social behaviour.

First

thing, Many people an uneducated so they miss behave with all as well as senior citizens. If they have any work their attitude is rude,

then

its impact on educating person due to if they are facing issues. So government should provide good education to all for free purpose, either should increase the literacy percentage.

Second

thing, period is more impact on

this

issue because a number of parents do not spend time with their children during busy life style. Parents must learn how to behave with others and older person's that will be build a good community. As a conclusion, the Government must give education for free to all and every parent should take their responsibility for children

then

they become good citizens.

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0Word repetition
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5 paragraphs

162 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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