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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning language at kindergarten

#language #kindergarten
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glish
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the English language
language
 is the most important
language
 to connect the world. Nowadays, plenty of family are teaching an English to their children since they are infant or before going to school. Many schools in Thailand are teaching an English at
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in
kindergarten
. For the positive ways ,
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earning English at
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in
kindergarten
 early make it more easily because they have more time and their mind, no needs to think or learn something too much and it is likely to become fluent due to the young learner are not concerned about their mistakes.In my experience ,
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hen you are growing and people around you are quite sp
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spoken
nglish fluently ,
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ometimes you will too embarrassing to start learning English at that ag
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age
And another reason is when children learning English in
kindergarten
 ,
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nglish classes is much more fun and interactive
such
 as song and games. The children will develop both receptive and productive skills.
On the other hand
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here are some negative ways about learning English at
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in
kindergarten
.
First
 of all ,
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oung st
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students'
ack of attention and motivation ,
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t could be difficult to
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for
hem to do something and repeat it many times.The teacher would like to set the relax atmosphere in the classroom and use something new that not only a simple lesson to encourage young student interactive.
Then
 learning English in
kindergarten
 is expensive not all of the school have English class at that age and not everyone can afford to teach or send their kids to learn English so early.The
last
 one is the young children have some ba
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basic
kills in front of them than learning a new
language
. After looking both sides ,
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t seems teaching
language
 at
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in
kindergarten
 has more advantages ,
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ut there is a parent’s duty to be considered and decide which ways is more suitable to
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for
our children.

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