A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honor, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, people judge the
person
based upon the social status and materialistic possessions one has. There is no much importance given to traditional values such
as honour, kindness or trust. I strongly oppose this
trend and do not agree that this
should be the criteria to judge someone's worth and this
essay attempts to discuss the same.
Respect is shared upon the social status someone beholds which is, in turn dependent upon the type of job or the designation of the person
in the company. It increases the net worth of a man as he/she can afford more expensive articles according to many. Neighbours consider them worthy to be living near their house only if they have a strong financial position. For instance
, sharing my personal experience, some of the people living near my house only interacted with me once they got to know that I have a job. Hence
, this
proves that money is more important in the eyes of people.
Honesty or kindness is the attribute present in the nature of person
. Earlier, people used to respect Suggestion
the person
a person
persons
people
such
individuals who possessed such
features. Even today, some people like to have such
kind of persons living near them as they can rely on their help and can share their personal problems as well. For example
, if there is some issue related to health or finance, one can connect with those people to get some advice. However
, there is a very small proportion of the population who adores people with these qualities.
To conclude, aforementioned points don sum up that person
's worth is judged upon the societal status and expensive, exotic items one possess. There is not much heed given to old fashioned values and I totally disagree with it. As per me, these values or attributes stay with the person
forever, whereas money may or may not be there always.Submitted by kumarvaibhav2009 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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